Well done!
Let me try to make some suggestions if you don't mind. They are all in CAPITAL LETTERS. Some of them may not be correct.
Last night I join the English learning class again and paid the fee.
This time we learned another article from New Concept English. First we listened TO the article and then listened sentence by sentence. The teacher asked each of us to repeat what we heard, which WAS difficult for me. I can catch what the CCTV international and CNN broadcast SPEAKERS SAY, but sometimes I just can’t UNDERSTAND New Concept English. Later I found there WERE some new vocabularies in that article, like “excursion”, which shareS the same meaning with “trip”, “journey” and “tour”.
For example:
We are planning for our excursion next week.
Next week we are going on an excursion.
The article tells us that one person planned to visit Woodford Green in the countryside by bus, but the conductor forgot to REMIND him where to get off, so he had to go back with the bus.
Then the teacher offered a talking SUBJECT: how do you comment on the current situation on the public TRANSPORTATION system.
Well, talking about this issue, I am sure that all of us have many arguments and complaints. Although great achievements have been made in the public transportation system in recent years, we still easily found many drawbacks. Being late frequently, too crowded, AND unreasonable route planning all incurred our debate. In spite of our poor English, we vented our anger on the bus services.
As far as I am concerned/ in my opinion, I think the relevant department should speed UP efforts to invest heavily IN our urban infrastructure, AND strengthen the supervision and management. The citizens should OBEY the social order and discipline their behaviors.
We do believe the bus system can offer us more excellent service and thus we can lead a more convenient life.